Date:
Monday, August 10, 2009
Time:
7:20 PM
Frailty's End
"Scarred by the war
Only one made her smile
Walking down the car
She cried a tidal.
Full of thrill, she felt
Gray eyes as wet as sea
Crying motionless and stealth
A hug likeso with a tree.
Never she felt this happy
Meeting this guy again
Born with war and agony
Relief from pain was gain.
A kiss in the cheek, she flew
Dazzled by his soft, tender lips
Dots around her body drew
Her cheeks are like strawberry dips.
Scarred by the war
Only one made her smile
Now he'll no longer be afar
Because the war is on its trial"
Wow, its like different eras had passed since I last wrote a poem this long. But still, I only wrote this for about thirty freaking minutes! Its really awesome because all these words just popped out my head and static waves transmitted the words through nerves down to my hand and wrote it. LOL!! I use tons of redunduncies, sorry!
Actually, I drew a picture of a very pretty and joyous girl with an eye-patch and in it was a hidden scar. She was my inspiration into making this poem. I really hope I can show you the drawing but it's not done yet. I guess you'll just have to wait.
I wish HE could end my frailed mind and heart. Right now, I'm still in a drastic war. Sometimes I awe if HE could be the guy in my poem and the girl in my drawing could be me. My real intention for this post is for everyone to read my poem so I'm not gonna add too much redunduncies anymore. I really hope you'll like it.
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